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The Secret in the Attic

Joe Doe - 4th Grade - Africa

     I had always thought my grandma’s house was a little creepy. It was one of those old houses with creaky floors, rooms that smelled like flower spray and moth balls, and a basement I would never, ever go into. But the attic? I never even thought about going up there...until that Friday night.

     It all started when Grandma called us into the kitchen after dinner. "I need a favor," she said, her eyes sparkling. "There’s an old trunk in the attic I can’t reach anymore. Do you think you can bring it down for me?"

     My older brother, Axel, shrugged. "Sure, no big deal."

     But as we climbed up the narrow, creaky stairs, I started to feel goosebumps. The attic door looked so old and dark, and it made a weird groaning sound when Axel pushed it open. Inside, it was even darker.

     "Come on, Conrad," Axel said, his voice echoing in the shadows. "Don’t be such a chicken."

     "I’m not a chicken!" I whispered, trying to sound braver than I felt. We clicked on our flashlights, which flickered a little, and the beams bounced around the room, casting long, wiggly shadows on the walls.

     Just then, something scurried across the floor. "AH!" I yelped, jumping back. "Did you see that?!"

     Axel laughed, but even he looked a little freaked out. "It was probably just a mouse," he said, though his voice sounded shaky.

     We spotted the trunk under a dusty sheet in the corner. Axel reached out and slowly pulled the sheet away, and there it was: a big, ancient-looking trunk with brass handles and tiny locks.

     "Whoa," I breathed loudly. "What do you think’s inside?"

     Axel shrugged, but I could see he was curious too. "Only one way to find out." He tried lifting the lid, but it wouldn’t budge. "It’s locked!"

     At that moment, something shiny caught my eye. I saw a small key on a string, hanging from an old nail in the wall. I grabbed it and held it up. "Maybe this is the key!"

Axel grinned. "Let’s try it."

     As soon as we slipped the key into the lock, we heard a tiny click. The lid creaked as we lifted it, and inside was the most incredible thing I’d ever seen.

     There was a stack of letters tied with a red ribbon, old black-and-white photos, and a small box covered in velvet. I reached for the box and opened it carefully. Inside was a delicate, silver locket.

     "Hey, look at this!" I held it up my heart doing sprints in my chest. The locket had a tiny picture of a young woman and man smiling, their faces smudged and worn. But they looked so happy.

     Just then, Grandma’s voice floated up the stairs. "What’s taking so long, you two?"

We hurried downstairs with the trunk and showed Grandma the locket. Her eyes went soft, and she held it like it was made of gold.

     "This… this belonged to my mother," she said, a faraway look in her eyes. "She wore it every day, and I thought I had lost it forever. I'm going to give it to your mother for her birthday. Don't you breathe a word to her about this."

     Axel and I exchanged a look. "Grandma," I asked, "can you tell us about your mother?" Grandma’s smile was sad but warm. She settled into her favorite armchair and started telling us stories about how her mother used to dance around the kitchen, and how she taught Grandma to bake cookies and sing silly songs. As she talked, the house didn’t seem so creepy anymore. It felt… like home.

    That night, Axel and I stayed up late, thinking about the treasure we found. It wasn’t gold or jewels, but it felt like the best treasure ever. And now we know the attic isn’t so scary after all. It's just a room filled with memories.

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